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Explanation Writing about The Treaty of Waitangi

The treaty of Waitangi is an agreement made between the British and the Maori Chiefs in the year 1840. When the treaty was being made, it was thought that it would benefit both the British and the Maori. Despite this, the translations of the treaty led to disagreements and chaos! Keep reading to find out why the Treaty of Waitangi is important!

The treaty of Waitangi is important because of the protection of Maori people. The treaty promised to protect Maori culture and let the Maori continue living in New Zealand as Maori. The treaty said that the Maori had total control over all their lands and everything important to them.

Another reason why the Treaty is important is because it’s part of history. The treaty of Waitangi was an agreement between the British Crown and a large number of Maori Chiefs which was signed in 1840. Today, the treaty is known as a constitutional document that establishes the relationship between the British and the Maori.

The last reason why the treaty of Waitangi is important is because it united and created peace among the British and Maori. The treaty of Waitangi was meant to be a partnership between the Maori and British crown.

I conclude that the treaty of Waitangi is important because of the protection, history, and peace. I conclude that the treaty is important because it promised that it would protect the Maori people and their culture, it created peace and also because of the history of the treaty of Waitangi

Narrative Story

Jazmine and the Magical Bracelet..


Once upon a time, far away, there lived a lovely, creative and imaginative teenage girl.  Jazmine was reading a book on her hammock when she noticed her imaginary friend Trixy was pointing at the beach.  Jazmine stared at the beach with confusion in her eyes but finally considered that the beach may be a great place to take a break. 


When Jazmine got out of the hammock, she took her cat Mr. Whiskers with her and walked to the beach with a delightful smile. When they got there, a sparkly object caught Jazmine’s eye. When she got closer, she noticed that the shiny item was a diamond bracelet. Once she picked it up, she looked around to see if anyone had come back for it or if anyone had passed. But no one was at the beach but her, Mr. Whiskers, and Trixy. After she looked around, she put on the bracelet not knowing that they would be in a whole different dimension.


Once Jazmine had put on the bracelet, Jazmine and Mr. Whiskers started floating in the air with sand circling them like a hurricane. Soon after that, They got transported into another dimension! When they got there, Jazmine was surprised when she saw all the amazing things! Like electrical tech, markets, and everything you could think of! The dimension they were currently in right now was called Imagination Land.


Jazmine was surprised that nothing happened to them. Until guards came up to them and handcuffed them! Once they were taken into the Galactical Palace, they noticed that the Queen was TRIXY! Jazmine soon noticed that the beach and the bracelet were all a trap! “Why would you do this!” Jazmine shouted. Trixy just left her speechless and locked them in a dungeon. Hours, days, and weeks have passed. Jazmine wondered if a hero would come and save them but it seems hope has lost.


Soon after Jazmine was about to give up, there was a large crash! Jazmine got up as fast as possible! The one who created the crash was a witch! The witch called out to Jazmine but Jazmine was too scared to reply. When the witch arrived at Jazmine’s dungeon she cast a levitation spell on the bars and moved them. 


The witch then took Jazmine’s hand and sat on the broom. Jazmine took Mr. Whiskers right before the Witch flew away. The witch introduced herself. Jazmine soon found out that the Witch’s name was Lynette. They soon arrived at Lynette’s witch cavern. When they arrived there, Lynette created a portal that leads to Jazmine’s house. Jazmine then hugged Lynette and went inside the portal waving goodbye. When she went inside her house she dashed into the living room hugging her family with tears covering her eyes. 


The End